Saturday, January 31, 2009

TODAY

Today is the typhoon that soares and rises above any man’s dreams
Today is the bird which flaps its little wings in this trapped little cage of mortals
in which the walls of tyranny dissolve away….
It is today for which I should smile and thank god for his munificence
And don’t swank on my past triumphs….
Today is the biggest hope we have got which I fail to see
Like I have got a soul, which I fail to communicte with
Its in here right in my self, that’s the beauty of it
They can’t reach there,they can’t touch,it’s mine hope…
Today is my destiny,it is my eternity,it is where my salvation lies
Before and beyond,which is a veil,capricious and dissolute
I am still in the past , gloating
I am not in the present , living
I was perhaps in the path of a tornado..waited to confront it
Just didn’t thought that it would last as long……
Yesterday was surely someone’s grave ,
tommorrow is also surely very far away
but yes ! I have got today for someone who’s brave
Today is the day I had been looking for,
Today is the way,on which I must move on…
Perhaps today is the hay on which this sun shines for perpetuality……..
His judgement cometh and that right soon…

DEEPANSHU KHURANA, 1ST YEAR , CIVIL ENGINEERING

1 comments:

mayank said...

This was probably written in extreme haste, because if I'm not mistaken, I was able to spot a few grammar errors. Now that is something which is simply not allowed. But otherwise, this poem has some lovely ideas

Today is the day I had been looking for,
Today is the way,on which I must move on…
Perhaps today is the hay on which this sun shines for perpetuality……..

This is very good. It even has a decent rhythm all through. Not a bad attempt. Just work a little on the grammar.