Sunday, September 14, 2008

The Senteen

Good bye teenage life...

You gave me a lot
And took too less...
I wish I had done more
To make it a success...
I wish I hadn't cried
When the sun was bright
I wish I hadn't slept
When there was some light...
Take care of my years
As they leave me behind
As I head for the a life
Unknown to my mind...


Ko said...

Happy birthday, young man. :)

Proud to have had you as a part of my crew, and proud to see how weather-wise you've grown to be.

wish you many more adventures and never any regrets

and ya, use the opportunity to write something more profound,lah..

rhymes are always cute, but the meter could easily be longer, no?