Dad always said i ain't the perfect son
But i knew for sure i'd be rocking when i'm done
Religious rehearses in rented apartments
Not killing time cramming academic parchments
Not etching formulas on the walls of my brain
Two days down the line,it would all go down the drain
I was born to be the harbinger of noise
Amps and pedals used to be my toys
It was no different as on that night
My six string shredded the silence of twilight
Cause when i forced the decibel to rise
It left my cult feeling hypnotisized
Amidst the multitude of the seemingly possessed
I could see some faces which looked perplexed
Illusioned by the grandeur they gazed in astound
Before yielding to the hysteria profound
And when the crowd asked for an encore,i couldn't deny
Having crowned me as the undisputed king thereby
God had already scripted my success story
My treacherous companions being fame and glory
Today i stand tall on these pillars of sand
Having buried all doubts, i have vindicated my stand
I head the rebellion against the tyranny of silence
Riding perilously on the waves of defiance
ROCK is the music on which the soul does feed
And i give this elixir to those in need......
4 comments:
Dad always said i ain't the perfect son
But i knew for sure I'd be rocking when I'm done
Isn't that jack black in school of rock?
grammar error
for that star *which is* brighter than the sun.
you could Brian may at least, if not Satriani..
An advice..Don't build your poem around a rhyme scheme, try to make the rhyme scheme a part of the poem..I hope that makes some sense
kaushl's 666) :)...its pretty much there in the poem..so is abhi-shake.
Good attempt man, keep writing, and never give up on metal
could be*
D beginning was totally intentional…
Dats y I kept those 2 lines separate n not included dem in ne stanza
I guess*who is* isn’t wrong (i.e if I’m allowed 2 counter)
Thx neways n don’t worry bout me givin up on metal;-P
\m/ metal rules and you ain't too far behind :)...rock on!
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