When do I write your obituary
there’s no respite from tears,
for materialized has my worst fear
I have lost he who was most dear
Why do I write your obituary
it’ll make me think you’re gone,
while in my heart I know
you’ll wake me up next dawn
What do I write in your obituary
the more that’s said the less,
if it fails to do justice to your life
I’ll be left with nothing but regret
How do I write your obituary
the ink, my tears will smear
perhaps I should use my blood
your name has rushed in it for many years
Where do I write your obituary
I feel your presence in every place
for the love you have for me
transcends boundaries of time and space
But if I do end up writing your obituary
there’s one thing of which I’m sure,
by the end of your obituary
I’ll be joining you, my dear....
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8 comments:
Very well expressed..
oye, a pretty good abab :)
eh, high time i stop swanking of having recognised the rhyming pattern, ;)
I keep six honest serving-men
(They taught me all I knew);
Their names are What and Why and When
And How and Where and Who.
-Rudyard Kipling
Now we know all about an obituary
nice concept, simply expressed.
enjoyed reading it :)
wah wah
It sounded sing-song sing-song and i was nodding my head to some tune while i read it...i am obviously not allowed to comment on the theme or the content because poetic license is still a realistic concept
but good flow and maintained rhythm..
and ooyish passionate :P
Wonderful natural rhythm ... I enjoyed it
thanks everyone... im yet to write a poem whose rhyme scheme doesnt stare hard in d face :p
I would die any day to have that written for me :) .. great write and yes im cheezy :P
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